Songwriters are doomed
- Bob Juch
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Songwriters are doomed
Today I heard that chatGPT can write songs. I have a line that I have been tossing around in my mind that I fed it: "that was your last second chance". This is what it came up with:
Verse 1:
You always said you'd change your ways
But you just kept on doing the same
Broken promises and empty phrases
It's time to face the music and the pain
Chorus:
That was your last second chance
To make it right, to take a stance
You let it slip, you let it fade
Now it's too late, it's time to pay
Verse 2:
You had a heart full of fire and gold
But now it's cold and it's hard as stone
You took for granted what you had to hold
And now it's gone, it's on its own
Chorus:
That was your last second chance
To make it right, to take a stance
You let it slip, you let it fade
Now it's too late, it's time to pay
Bridge:
You can't turn back the hands of time
You can't erase what you left behind
You can't pretend that it's alright
You can't deny that was your last chance
Chorus:
That was your last second chance
To make it right, to take a stance
You let it slip, you let it fade
Now it's too late, it's time to pay
Outro:
You had a shot, but you missed the mark
Now you're left in the dark
You can't go back, you can't undo
That was your last second chance, it's true.
Verse 1:
You always said you'd change your ways
But you just kept on doing the same
Broken promises and empty phrases
It's time to face the music and the pain
Chorus:
That was your last second chance
To make it right, to take a stance
You let it slip, you let it fade
Now it's too late, it's time to pay
Verse 2:
You had a heart full of fire and gold
But now it's cold and it's hard as stone
You took for granted what you had to hold
And now it's gone, it's on its own
Chorus:
That was your last second chance
To make it right, to take a stance
You let it slip, you let it fade
Now it's too late, it's time to pay
Bridge:
You can't turn back the hands of time
You can't erase what you left behind
You can't pretend that it's alright
You can't deny that was your last chance
Chorus:
That was your last second chance
To make it right, to take a stance
You let it slip, you let it fade
Now it's too late, it's time to pay
Outro:
You had a shot, but you missed the mark
Now you're left in the dark
You can't go back, you can't undo
That was your last second chance, it's true.
I may not have gone where I intended to go, but I think I have ended up where I needed to be.
- Douglas Adams (1952 - 2001)
Si fractum non sit, noli id reficere.
Teach a child to be polite and courteous in the home and, when he grows up, he'll never be able to drive in New Jersey.
- Douglas Adams (1952 - 2001)
Si fractum non sit, noli id reficere.
Teach a child to be polite and courteous in the home and, when he grows up, he'll never be able to drive in New Jersey.
- Bob Juch
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Re: Songwriters are doomed
I told it to make it more personal:
Verse 1:
I gave you my heart and my trust
I thought our love would never rust
But you took advantage of my trust
And now it's time to face the truth and adjust
Chorus:
That was your last second chance
To show me love, to take a stand
You let it slip, you let it fade
Now it's too late, it's time to pay
Verse 2:
I stood by you through thick and thin
But you just let me down again
You broke my heart, you caused me pain
And now it's time to end this chain
Chorus:
That was your last second chance
To show me love, to take a stand
You let it slip, you let it fade
Now it's too late, it's time to pay
Bridge:
You can't turn back the hands of time
You can't erase what you left behind
You can't pretend that it's alright
You can't deny that was your last chance
Chorus:
That was your last second chance
To show me love, to take a stand
You let it slip, you let it fade
Now it's too late, it's time to pay
Outro:
You had a shot, but you missed the mark
Now you're left in the dark
You can't go back, you can't undo
That was your last second chance, it's true.
Verse 1:
I gave you my heart and my trust
I thought our love would never rust
But you took advantage of my trust
And now it's time to face the truth and adjust
Chorus:
That was your last second chance
To show me love, to take a stand
You let it slip, you let it fade
Now it's too late, it's time to pay
Verse 2:
I stood by you through thick and thin
But you just let me down again
You broke my heart, you caused me pain
And now it's time to end this chain
Chorus:
That was your last second chance
To show me love, to take a stand
You let it slip, you let it fade
Now it's too late, it's time to pay
Bridge:
You can't turn back the hands of time
You can't erase what you left behind
You can't pretend that it's alright
You can't deny that was your last chance
Chorus:
That was your last second chance
To show me love, to take a stand
You let it slip, you let it fade
Now it's too late, it's time to pay
Outro:
You had a shot, but you missed the mark
Now you're left in the dark
You can't go back, you can't undo
That was your last second chance, it's true.
I may not have gone where I intended to go, but I think I have ended up where I needed to be.
- Douglas Adams (1952 - 2001)
Si fractum non sit, noli id reficere.
Teach a child to be polite and courteous in the home and, when he grows up, he'll never be able to drive in New Jersey.
- Douglas Adams (1952 - 2001)
Si fractum non sit, noli id reficere.
Teach a child to be polite and courteous in the home and, when he grows up, he'll never be able to drive in New Jersey.
- Bob Juch
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Re: Songwriters are doomed
It can do limericks too:
There once was a cat, quite a fool
Who thought that a mouse was a stool
But when it tried to sit
It just took a quick spit
And ran away, like it was cool!
There once was a cat, quite a fool
Who thought that a mouse was a stool
But when it tried to sit
It just took a quick spit
And ran away, like it was cool!
I may not have gone where I intended to go, but I think I have ended up where I needed to be.
- Douglas Adams (1952 - 2001)
Si fractum non sit, noli id reficere.
Teach a child to be polite and courteous in the home and, when he grows up, he'll never be able to drive in New Jersey.
- Douglas Adams (1952 - 2001)
Si fractum non sit, noli id reficere.
Teach a child to be polite and courteous in the home and, when he grows up, he'll never be able to drive in New Jersey.
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Re: Songwriters are doomed
Nothing rhymes with Nantucket.
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There once was a place called Nantucket
Where folks had a peculiar bucket
They fished all day long
And sang a merry song
And their laughter and joy couldn't be stuck it!
I may not have gone where I intended to go, but I think I have ended up where I needed to be.
- Douglas Adams (1952 - 2001)
Si fractum non sit, noli id reficere.
Teach a child to be polite and courteous in the home and, when he grows up, he'll never be able to drive in New Jersey.
- Douglas Adams (1952 - 2001)
Si fractum non sit, noli id reficere.
Teach a child to be polite and courteous in the home and, when he grows up, he'll never be able to drive in New Jersey.
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Billy Bored weeps.
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It misspelled the last word. That should be an "h" instead of a "p."
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silverscreenselect wrote: ↑Sat Feb 04, 2023 2:33 pmIt misspelled the last word. That should be an "h" instead of a "p."
I may not have gone where I intended to go, but I think I have ended up where I needed to be.
- Douglas Adams (1952 - 2001)
Si fractum non sit, noli id reficere.
Teach a child to be polite and courteous in the home and, when he grows up, he'll never be able to drive in New Jersey.
- Douglas Adams (1952 - 2001)
Si fractum non sit, noli id reficere.
Teach a child to be polite and courteous in the home and, when he grows up, he'll never be able to drive in New Jersey.